Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
+2
Admin
fastfrag
6 posters
Page 1 of 1
Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
Last edited by fastfrag on Fri 09 May 2008, 12:00; edited 1 time in total
fastfrag- Member
-
Number of posts : 91
Age : 42
Location : Singapore
Reputation : 2
Registration date : 2008-05-06
Re: Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
good job~~ Ur bicycle in the photo as foreground is a brilliant idea... How about making it a Monochrome? Maybe will be better? But the sky compensate the whole photo.. Nice job..
Re: Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
If the bicycle is the main subject, maybe more focus n details on it....The background was messy with too many object inside, therefore fail to draw my eyes to the bicycle.
Somehow I feel BW would have more feel.....
Just my noob view
Somehow I feel BW would have more feel.....
Just my noob view
Re: Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
mm....i find the bottom a bit tight..especially u can feel that on the bike. And if u were to be able to take a slightly closer shot of the bike, it will add to the interest to the foreground which will lead the viewers eyes to the background beauty...
Just my 2 cent's worth...
Just my 2 cent's worth...
fastfrag- Member
-
Number of posts : 91
Age : 42
Location : Singapore
Reputation : 2
Registration date : 2008-05-06
Re: Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
hm... will take all feedback into consideration thanks to all
fastfrag- Member
-
Number of posts : 91
Age : 42
Location : Singapore
Reputation : 2
Registration date : 2008-05-06
Re: Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
looks like way back in 1970's......nice threat in Black and white
Re: Cycling along Lim Chu Kang Road
it gave me the vintage look! Try giving it more punch with more contrast for dramatic feel!
More more!
More more!
Metalz- Senior Member
-
Number of posts : 212
Age : 53
Location : Kota Kinabalu, Sabah, Malaysia
Reputation : 6
Registration date : 2008-12-04
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
|
|