nIGHT oUT nEAR rAFFLES mRT

.Renault.


.Staggered Streaks.


.Niche.


.Looking up.


.Night Reflection.


C & C are welcomed

hi!
Welcome back!

mm...here are my comments:
#1: a bit messy....the black wheel seem to catch my attention more......which i'm not sure if that is what u want ur viewers to know..

#2: exposure time relay is not long enough. It should be set longer than 10s. When it is longer, the streak of lights will be longer and look more like laser beams.

#3: If the tile's texture is what u want to exphasize, u should take it at a lower angle with the light shining from the left. If that is not the effect u are after, errr..may i know what is ur subject matter?

#4: The moon's has not created enoguh dramatic effect on the flat. Something seems missing....seem kind of flat.

#5: rather interesting reflection image. However, with an object in the foreground would be better. the thing about plants is that, they create great background but lack subject matter, UNLESS they have distinct elements like straight lines of angles or uniformity, it can be created as a subject matter...

Hope my opinions are not too harsh.......

cheers!

looks like all are snap shots to me...i like #4, shd get more details to the moon.

thx for sharing.

Thanks for all the comments, Jhun and Nick.

#3: If the tile's texture is what u want to exphasize, u should take it at a lower angle with the light shining from the left. If that is not the effect u are after, errr..may i know what is ur subject matter?

The faint light, lighting the dark path is the subject matter. Yup, the subject matter ain't strong nor interesting.

#2: exposure time relay is not long enough. It should be set longer than 10s. When it is longer, the streak of lights will be longer and look more like laser beams.

Purposely made it that way, 'cos wanna see how staggered streaks looks like. Longer streaks seems too common to me.

#5: rather interesting reflection image. However, with an object in the foreground would be better. the thing about plants is that, they create great background but lack subject matter, UNLESS they have distinct elements like straight lines of angles or uniformity, it can be created as a subject matter...

Placing object in front would not be appropriate to me 'cos my subject matter is night relection ma. If an object is placed infront the background becomes a distraction.

Saymell wrote:Thanks for all the comments, Jhun and Nick.

#3: If the tile's texture is what u want to exphasize, u should take it at a lower angle with the light shining from the left. If that is not the effect u are after, errr..may i know what is ur subject matter?

The faint light, lighting the dark path is the subject matter. Yup, the subject matter ain't strong nor interesting.

#2: exposure time relay is not long enough. It should be set longer than 10s. When it is longer, the streak of lights will be longer and look more like laser beams.

Purposely made it that way, 'cos wanna see how staggered streaks looks like. Longer streaks seems too common to me.

#5: rather interesting reflection image. However, with an object in the foreground would be better. the thing about plants is that, they create great background but lack subject matter, UNLESS they have distinct elements like straight lines of angles or uniformity, it can be created as a subject matter...

Placing object in front would not be appropriate to me 'cos my subject matter is night relection ma. If an object is placed infront the background becomes a distraction.

Icic... Now I understand ur views.. KAKAKA!! Good job anyway..

Looking up... i vote for that.